Mathew "Bright"

We only call him Bright because that is his name. We continue our analysis of his script MANSON GIRLS. Please note that there is so much historical inaccuracy it is sickening. And bad writing. I hope any financier realizes that what buried THE HURRICANE movie was the inaccuracies. I don't think Sadie was at Esalen being fucked by Charlie. The girls were arrested using a credit card from Mary Vitasek not Gary Hinman. Charlie never had a copycat motive idea. How many errors and stupidity can you find? -----------

ON FAVORING TABLE – showing Charlie giving a massage to Sadie.

ON HIPPIES – looking ever so peaceful, when Sadie is HEARD.

SADIE
Oh, fuck... Yeah...

ANGLE ON SADIE – as Charlie climbs on her like an animal and starts fucking her in full view of the PATRONS.

ON ESALEN CLIENTS – watching Charlie fucking Sadie with these bemused expressions. .

CHARLIE

Who’s your daddy? Tell me who your daddy is?

SADIE

Oh, baby… You’re my daddy… Yeah, you’re

my daddy…

CHARLIE

Flip over, baby! Yeah!

ON CHARLIE – as Sadie enthusiastically flips over to receive Charlie missionary style.

BRENDA NARRATING O.S. cont.

Esalen had a well deserved reputation for being

a real “do your own thing” kind of place, but I

guess Charlie took it a little too far and the

management ended up throwing them both out…

EXT. ESALEN ENTRANCE – DAY

Charlie and Sadie are shoved out the door by a bunch of HIPPIES.

CHARLIE

Yeah, fuck you, you hippie cocksuckers! Fuck

you! You think you’re better than me! You better

watch your backs, motherfuckers! ‘Somebody

might come out’a nowhere an’ cut your goddamn

hearts out, you hear?!

SADIE

Yeah, you fuckin’ people totally bite, you know

that?! Fuckin’ assholes!

Charlie storms angrily away with Sadie following.

SADIE cont.

Charlie, wait up!

INT. GARY’S HOUSE – DAY

COPS walk in to look at Gary’s body which is now covered in flies and looking really, really disgusting.

BRENDA NARRATING O.S.

And then while Charlie and Sadie were off

role playing at Esalen, the cops found Gary’s

body and immediately put out an APB for his

missing cars…

INT. HIGHWAY 5 – CENTRAL CALIFORNIA – DAY

Bobby Beausoleil is on his belly, crying in the dirt next to Gary’s green FIAT as the COPS cuff his hands behind his back.

BRENDA NARRATING O.S.

And a couple of days later, wouldn’t you know

it? Bobby got pulled over just outside Ventura

in Gary’s Fiat… It was the last day of freedom

he’d ever know..

EXT. SEARS ENTRANCE – DAY

Mary Brunner and Sandra Goode are standing outside the entrance to Sears with their hands up against the wall as TWO POLICE OFFICERS handcuff them.

BRENDA NARRATING O.S.

And then the following day, Mary and Sandra

got pinched with a bunch of stolen credit cards...

CUT TO:

EXT. SPAHN RANCH – DUSK

Charlie is obviously in a horrible mood after his ejection from Esalen as he marches up to the ranch with Sadie following

INT. SALOON – FEW MINUTES LATER

Brenda, Sadie, Squeaky and Clem are fooling around under a pile of sleeping bags, when Charlie enters.

SQUEAKY

Hey, Charlie. Hey, Sadie... Did you hear

about Bobby?

CHARLIE

No, what about him?

SQUEAKY

Oh, fuck… Charlie… This is bad… Bobby got

pulled over in Gary’s Fiat and now they’re

holding him on a fucking murder charge in

Ventura!

CHARLIE

What a dumb shit!
BRENDA

Then this morning Mary and Sandra got caught

with a whole sack full of credit cards!

CHARLIE

That ain’t so bad… But Bobby… That’s bad…

BRENDA

No, no… They tried to use Gary’s Visa card!

CLEM

(giggling)

But check it out, man… The cops were too stupid

to put any of it together.

CHARLIE

What, you think they’re not going to figure it

out?!

SADIE

Maybe they won’t.

CHARLIE

You’re a fuckin’ idiot...

(to Squeaky)

What’s their bail?

SQUEAKY

No bail for Bobby… And right now the girl’s

bail is six hundred... But there won’t be any bail

when they realize they’ve got Gary’s Visa card...

(beat)

… We’re completely tapped out, Charlie… We’ve

got no money.. You put everything we had into

dune buggies...

BRENDA NARRATING O.S.

And that was when Helter Skelter turned from

being real for us, to being real for everybody

else... See, Charlie figured if the cops were called

to another crime scene that was enough like where

they found Gary’s body, then they’d have to let

Bobby go...

(beat)

And if he kicked off a race war that toppled the

white, Christian pig power structure while he

was doing it, then so much the better.

Thinking Out Loud

Do you think when they find nothing at Barker those so called
Po-Lice will get fired?



Do you think when Sadie dies the other girls might speak more plainly about what they know?


Do you think that Manson Girls film is actually gonna get made?

Funniest Shit Evah!

Jimmy, the obsessed fan from Staten Island who thinks the murdering whore Leslie Van Houten loves him has just posted THE FUNNIEST SHIT.
I beg you to go read it.
He just paid $850 or so for two old file photos. Photos that every paper in the country had. And he thinks Debra should leave the murdering whore LVH alone in return for the photos.
You will blow snot.

I did.
Here are the photos. For you. For free. Wait till he realizes he didn't buy the copyright when he bought the photos!
Suckwad!

The People Behind the Movie THE MANSON GIRLS

Producer: Brad Wyman
email:
bwhibbs@aol.com

He is the guy who is trying to get Lindsay Lohan insured. The guy with the bad hairdo.

The WRITER and DIRECTOR of this crappy film is
mwbright@gmail.com
He is the bozo in the hat and earphones.

If you wish to contact them, like one blog member did, this is the best way.









But what you really want is more script commentary? How about the lame writer trying to make Brenda all sympathetic?

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EXT. BEACH – WEEKS LATER - DAY

Brenda sits looking out at the ocean.

BRENDA NARRATING O.S.
I hadn’t taken a drug in nearly a year and so I
was finally able to feel something for all those
people who’d been killed…

INT. PITTMAN DINING ROOM – NIGHT

Brenda sits alone eating dinner across from her little brother in silence..
BRENDA NARRATING O.S.
And when I heard what my friends had done to
the LaBiancas and how they’d posed the bodies
and carved “pig” on Mr. LaBianca’s stomach and
left this barbecue fork stuck in his body, I felt kind
of sick… And deep down, I knew their lives were
over...

CUT TO:

INT. BRENDA’S CAR – DAY

Brenda drives through the city listening to the radio.

D.J.
Yes, caller number four… What do you think
about what pundits are calling the, “Trial of
the Century”?

CALLER
I think they should dispense with this trial and
execute them… Anyone can see they’re guilty…

Brenda turns off the radio. It’s just too depressing.

BRENDA NARRATING O.S.
I don’t know what made me drive downtown to
where the trial was being held… I guess I just
needed to be there

EXT. SIDEWALK – DAY

Brenda walks down the sidewalk where a bunch of NEWS VANS covering the Manson Trial are parked.

ANOTHER ANGLE – Squeaky, Sandra Goode and Gypsy sit on the sidewalk looking incredibly cheerful and surrounded by ONLOOKERS.

SQUEAKY
Oh, my God! You’re out! You’re out!

Squeaky leaps to her feet, then runs up and embraces Brenda for a long moment as Sandra and Gypsy rush up to hug her too.

SQUEAKY cont.
Oh, my God! Where are you living?!
BRENDA
At my parent’s place, in Malibu.

SQUEAKY
Well, not anymore, you’re not!

BRENDA
No, Squeaky, listen... I have to stay in Malibu…
My bail was contingent on my being in the
custody of my parents… I can’t go anywhere…

SQUEAKY
Oh, bullshit… I rented a house a half a mile from
here and there’s plenty of room... Now come on…
We’ll go there now... I need to talk to you…

INT. SQUEAKY’S DOWNTOWN HOUSE – DAY

Brenda sits at the kitchen table snorting lines of crystal with Squeaky.

SQUEAKY
So right after the big bust in the desert, Dede’s
parents packed her off to Paris to be a model.

BRENDA
You know they weren’t gonna let her stick
around for this circus.

SQUEAKY
Yeah, and I wish her well… I really do… But she
was just a tourist… She was never really part of us...
Jeez, toward the end there, I don’t think I saw her
more than once or twice...
(beat)
You know, Clem and Danny got indicted yesterday…

BRENDA
For what?

SQUEAKY
I keep forgetting you’ve been in jail all this time.
(beat)
The day after you got busted, about a week before
the big move to Death Valley… We all got together
and killed Shorty.

BRENDA
Oh, my God.

SQUEAKY
Hey, you knew it was going to happen sooner or
later.

BRENDA
Yeah, he was a pain in the ass all right.

SQUEAKY
It took a really long time too… First they started
on his feet and then they worked their way up to
his head. Just cutting and cutting... Fuck, it was
so intense...

BRENDA
That’s enough… I don’t want to hear anymore.

SQUEAKY
Then they hoisted him up by his feet and

BRENDA
Sadie!

SADIE
Sorry... Sorry...

BRENDA
How’d they get caught?

SQUEAKY
How do you think?

BRENDA
Sadie, of course.

SQUEAKY
Of course it was Sadie... I’m lucky I’m not in
jail too.

BRENDA
Charlie was crazy to have Sadie do all that stuff.



SQUEAKY
Yeah, well... He’s only human...
(beat)
Hey, wait’ll you meet the guys.

BRENDA
What guys?

SQUEAKY
Some guys Charlie hooked up with, for protection
from the blacks... Who, as you can imagine, are
pretty pissed off at him.
(beat)
They’re calling themselves, “The Aryan
Brotherhood.” Anyway, two of ‘em staying here…
Wait’ll you meet ‘em… They’re so damn cute…

BRENDA
Listen, Squeaky... I have a curfew now... And I
really need to be getting back... It’s a long drive
to Malibu.

Squeaky gets a hard expression.

SQUEAKY
God, Brenda... I don’t even know you anymore.

BRENDA
Yeah, well... I don’t even know myself anymore.

SQUEAKY
Look, you’re Brenda McCann and you’re one of
us. And right now, Charlie and three of our sisters
are on trial for their lives not half a mile from
here and you want to go back to Malibu? What
the hell’s in Malibu?

BRENDA NARRATING O.S.
Squeaky was right... There wasn’t anything in
Malibu to replace what I’d lost... So I risked
everything and broke the terms of my bail and
moved back in with Squeaky... And I didn’t care
if I went to jail for a thousand years... I just wanted
to belong again...

Because the VD didn't get her 39 Years Ago

Woman involved in Sharon Tate's murder is in hospital

By RICHARD K. DE ATLEY
The Press-Enterprise

Susan Atkins, who took part in the bloody 1969 Tate-LaBianca murders as a member of the Charles Manson Family and shrugged off actress Sharon Tate's plea to save her unborn baby, has been hospitalized for more than a month with an undisclosed illness, a state prison spokeswoman confirmed Monday.

Atkins, who will be 60 on May 7, has been in stable condition since going to a hospital March 18.

Her location was described as "in the community" by Terry Thornton, a spokeswoman for the California Department of Corrections and Rehabilitation.

Federal privacy laws forbid disclosure of Atkins' location or the nature of her illness, Thornton said.

Atkins' husband and attorney in her latest bid for freedom in federal court, James W. Whitehouse, declined comment Monday. "I could be disbarred," he said, citing his role as Atkins' lawyer.

Inmate

She is a longtime inmate at the California Institute for Women at Frontera near Chino, along with former Manson Family members Patricia Krenwinkel and Leslie Van Houten.

Atkins has been denied parole 13 times since her first hearing in 1976. Her most recent hearing was in 2005.

She is serving a life sentence on her convictions for eight murders linked to the cult of young men and women who followed Manson's orders in the summer of 1969 to commit mayhem that Manson called "Helter Skelter," after a Beatles song.

Manson believed the carnage would start a race war.

Atkins has long claimed she has reformed since following Manson. Her Web site claims she was "Born Again" in 1974 and contains downloads of her Bible studies. She also co-authored a 1977 book, "Child of Satan, Child of God."

Atkins took part in the slaughter of five people by knife and gunshot on Aug. 8, 1969, at the rambling Benedict Canyon home rented by Tate and her husband, director Roman Polanski. He was away at the time.

Tate, who was 8 ½ months pregnant when she was killed, was stabbed 16 times in the chest and back by Atkins and Charles "Tex" Watson, who is also serving a life sentence.

Parole Hearing

In a 1993 parole hearing, Atkins recalled the slaying.

She claimed she was asked by Watson to guard Tate, who was tied up and lying on the floor of her home.

"I was just sitting in front of her," Atkins said.

"What did she say?" Commissioner Manny Guaderrama asked.

"She asked me to let the baby live," Atkins said tearfully.

"And what did you say?" Guaderrama asked.

"I told her I didn't have mercy for her," she said.

She said she was not asking to be excused from the act.

"It is almost impossible to understand insanity," she said, "and that's what I was living with, insanity."

It was Atkins who prosecutors said tasted Tate's blood and used some of it to write "PIG" on a wall of the home.

Debra Tate

"I don't have any animosity for these people. I have gotten over that years ago," Debra Tate, 55, the sister of Sharon Tate and last living member of the Tate family, said Monday.

"I do think it is appropriate that they all will pass away while they are incarcerated," said Tate, who lives in Southern California. "I don't trust that they are less sociopathic than when they committed the murders 40 years ago."

Of Atkins' illness, Tate said, "I really do feel badly for her family."

One night after the Tate massacre, members of the Manson Family killed grocery executive Leno LaBianca and his wife, Rosemary, in their home in the Los Feliz neighborhood of Los Angeles.

Atkins was not present at the LaBianca slayings, but she was convicted as a conspirator in the murders.

Atkins also was convicted for her participation in the July 1969 slaying of musician Gary Hinman, who prosecutors said was slain because the Manson Family wanted their money back from a bad drug deal. Hinman was stabbed and suffocated.

It was Atkins who wrote "Political Piggy" in blood on the wall of Hinman's home, authorities said.

"Susan Atkins: She was certainly an avid participant in all the Family activities, up to and including murder," Sandi Gibbons, a spokeswoman for Los Angeles County District Attorney Steve Cooley, said Monday.

Gibbons covered the Tate-LaBianca trials as a reporter, and still refers to Atkins as "Sadie," from her Family nickname as "Sexy Sadie" and alias as Sadie Mae Glutz.

Atkins was one of Manson's earliest followers, Gibbons said. "She bought his shtick -- hook, line and sinker. She was a believer and it cost her freedom and it cost a lot of people their freedom, because they believed in Manson."

Atkins has challenged her parole denial and sentence in federal court.

A 2002 claim that her civil rights as a prisoner were violated and a 2003 effort to find a federal issue in her imprisonment failed. The latest effort, which also seeks federal intervention, had a filing as recently as Feb. 7, court records show.

The Col Blogs.... So Debra Tate is the new BUGliosi, showing up like Punch for every show? How pathetic.... Winehouse worries about disbarment? How about a client or two Jim?.... the Federal case is an excellent idea if you want to be free- but will fail in her case... why couldn't she just deal with the fact that you stab a pregnant woman and dance in her blood and you ain't gonna get out evah?.... Sadie never could keep her story straight... Snitch!

Remember to Shake Afterwards

Bret, the owner of the best Manson site on the web, thinks the Manson Girls Script is great. I wonder if it is the amazing dialogue (Fuck you- no Fuck You) or the fact that.... nah it just sucks beginning to end. Here's a scene at the Hinman house. Notice how he seems all down and into being the victim. Drive me to the emergency room indeed!

BACK TO SCENE

Sadie finds she can’t look Charlie in the eye and turns her attention back to Gary.

SADIE cont.

Let me look at it, Gary, okay? Just take your
hands away… I need to look at it...

GARY

I can’t believe he did that!

Gary lets Sadie push his hands to reveal his wound as Mary looks over her shoulder. Then Bobby walks back in to look over Mary’s shoulder and grimace at the sight..

SADIE

Fuck, Gary! Shit! Oh, man! Your ear’s like,

completely split in half!

GARY

Great, you guys! Just great!

MARY

He really tore him a new ear hole.

GARY

Fuck off, Mary!

(beat)

Now which one of you assholes is driving me to

the emergency room?

BOBBY

Forget it, Gary... … Emergency rooms mean cops…

Let’s just keep this shit in house, okay?

SADIE

Which means, I gotta sew your ear up myself,

Gary... For real... You need some serious stitches.

GARY

No way you’re getting near my ear, Sadie! No

fucking way!

SADIE

Look, I’m gonna go to the market an’ get some

food and find whatever I can for Gary’s ear, okay?

BOBBY

Yeah, get some pizza or something… With meat,

okay? I’m tired of all this fucking vegetarian shit.

SADIE

You want something, Gary? My treat… What do

you feel like?

GARY

Fuck you, Sadie!

SADIE

I’ll just get whatever looks good.

GARY

I’m not eating anything with meat in it.

EXT. GARY’S HOUSE – HALF HOUR LATER

Sadie drives up and gets out of the car with a bag of groceries in her arms.

INT. GARY’S HOUSE – SAME MOMENT

Sadie enters to find Gary laying on the couch BOUND with ROPE at his wrist and ankle.

SADIE

Why’s he all tied up?

MARY

Because he threw a glass at me, okay?

SADIE

Whatever...

(beat)

So listen, Gary... I got pizza and drinks and all

kinds of good stuff for your ear, okay?

GARY

You aren’t a doctor, Sadie... So stop pretending

you are. No way you’re touching my ear.

SADIE

I used to work in a veterinary hospital, okay? So

we can do this the easy way with you cooperating,

or we can do it the hard way and then we’ll just sit

on you… It’s your choice, Gary.

GARY

You’re crazy!

Gary lets Sadie examine his ear.

SADIE

Now hold still… I need to put this medicine

on it and it’s probably going to sting a little…

Sadie uncaps the plastic bottle of Bactine and squirts it all over his hair, his collar, his face, his eyes and sort of incidentally onto his wounded ear.

GARY

Fuck, it hurts! It hurts!

SADIE

Well, I warned you didn’t I?

MARY

You’re being very brave, Gary. I’m really

proud of you.

Sadie then threads the dental floss into a sewing needle and sits down by Gary where she starts sewing his ear back on. Meanwhile, Gary begins to chant to deal with the pain.

GARY

Nyom Nyoh Ringeh Kyoh… Nyom Nyoh…

ON BOBBY – watching the procedure and getting very queasy..

MARY

God, this is so disgusting...

ON MARY – queasy to the point of nausea.

GARY O.S.

Nyom Nyoh Ringeh Kyoh… Nyom Nyoh

Ringeh Kyoh…

TIGHT ON SADIE – concentrating intensely as she sews Gary’s ear back together.

GARY O.S. cont.

Nyom Nyoh Ringeh Kyoh… Nyom Nyoh

Ringeh Kyoh…

SADIE

There… Now you look beautiful again.

Bobby looks over Sadie’s handiwork.

INSERT ON GARY’S EAR – it’s the most badly executed stitch job ever, like Dr. Frankenstein went to work on him

GARY

I gotta pee, okay…

Sadie grabs a bowl of bloody water and tosses the contents out the window, then hands it to Mary for Gary to pee in..

SADIE

Take his pecker out so he can pee.

GARY

I think I can pee for myself, if you just fucking

untie me!

BOBBY

Not until you sign the cars over, okay?

Mary rolls Gary to his side and undoes his pants. Then she takes the bowl from Sadie and holds it under him, then takes his dick in her hand and aims it for him so he can pee.

SADIE

(to Mary)

Don’t forget to give it a little shake after.

GARY

Fuck you, Sadie.

SADIE

Listen, Gary... If you sign the cars over, I’ll give

you a super awesome blowjob.

GARY

No way!

SADIE

Come on, Gary, please! I wanna go home!

GARY

Fuck you!

About that MANSON GIRLS Movie....

First off let me note that neither the HOLLYWOOD REPORTER nor VARIETY have reported on this film yet. Considering they usually do a story on any film that even MIGHT get made one might assume that the movie THE MANSON GIRLS is more tenuous that one might think. And you would be correct.

Brad Wyman the producer is legendary in Hollywood for having lost his mind one year in Cannes, stripping naked and running up and down the Croisette. Matthew Bright the director, aside from directing the unmistakenly bad film FREEWAY directed a film called TIPTOES in which Gary Oldman played a dwarf. Yes you heard me. You could ask Matthew about the film but he got fired off of it pretty fast. He had nothing to do with the post production of the film at all. And then there is the alleged star Lindsay Lohan. Her last 5 films have been bombs. She has been in and out of rehab. Wyman said in his interview that they got insurance for her. But I don't believe they have insurance or even money to make the film. And thanks to her tabloid exploits I don't believe anyone will finance it- it would be like pissing money down the drain. Top that off with the screenplay I read- written not even on a screenwriting program but simply on Microsoft Word, it is stupid and grossly inaccurate and badly written. Helter Skelter the remake was better than what I read and THAT SUCKED.

But I got better reasons why I predict this never happens. The law of the land. You see, the real Nancy Pitman must now be aware of the possible existence of this film. She has not been looking for attention by lying out her ass like Gypsy. She has been quietly doing her planting and nursery work in Oregon. Now, the filmmakers have the right to depict her based on the public record, sure. But that means the court trials. And there is so much bullshit in the screenplay that any Errors and Omissions insurance company will refuse to insure it.

If Nancy Pitman is out there, get a lawyer honey. You can stop this film without trying and you really should. Protect whatever good name you earned over the last 30 years.

----------another scene from the screenplay- badly written and all inaccurate------------

EXT. TERRY MELCHER’S CIELO DRIVE HOUSE – DAY

A day time get together with about fifteen upscale Rock & Roll CELEBRITIES.

Mingling among the professionals are various Manson Girls, including Brenda, Squeaky and Sadie, really pouring it on and acting as flirty and vivacious as possible.

ANOTHER ANGLE - Dennis is introducing Charlie to various PARTY GOERS, one of whom is an enormous FAT WOMAN.

DENNIS

Hey, Cass... I want you to meet this guy I’m getting

ready to record… This is Charlie Manson... Charlie,

this is Cass Elliot, from the Mamas and the Papas…

MAMA CASS

Hello, Charlie… I’ve heard a lot about you.

Charlie proceeds to kiss ass with the rock stars to the point of nausea.

CHARLIE

Hey, Mama Cass... I’ve been digging your records

for a long time now.

DENNIS

And this is Frank Zappa. Frank, this is Charlie

Manson...

CHARLIE
Your music is so groovy. Definitely groovy.

Frank takes an instant dislike to Charlie. Something about his heavy handed charm offensive just rubs him the wrong way.

FRANK

Well, Charlie… We try to be groovy in

everything we do… Grooviness is definitely

one of the qualities we strive for…

Charlie catches the disrespect immediately. He gives Frank a cold look. Frank sees it

and laughs contemptuously. Dennis sees it too and takes Charlie by the arm.

DENNIS

Hey, Charlie… C’mere, there’s someone else

I want you to meet…

Charlie looks back coldly at Frank Zappa for a moment as Dennis leads him away to a MAN standing on the other side of the room with a beautiful blonde WOMAN.

DENNIS cont.

Charlie, this is my producer and our host, Terry

Melcher and his girlfriend, Candice Bergen…

Charlie looks Candice Bergen like she’s a particularly choice piece of meat.

CHARLIE

I really like your movies, lady.

CANDICE

Why, thank you, Charlie. How nice of you to

say so.

ON BRENDA, SQUEAKY & SADIE – dancing with a funny little guy with a mustache. This is SONNY BONO (32).

BRENDA

So, Sonny... Where’s Cher?

SONNY

She’s visiting her mom back east.

SADIE

She’s really hot.

SONNY

Yes, she’s definitely that.

SADIE

Is she into girls?

SONNY

You’d really have to ask her that yourself...

(beat)

So, who’s your friend?

Sonny gestures toward Charlie who’s talking with Terry Melcher and Candice Bergen.

SQUEAKY

Oh, that’s Charlie... The most amazing man in

the world. And the next Bob Dylan... No, he’s

better than Bob Dylan.

SONNY

Really... He’s like your guru or something?

BRENDA

Something like that.

SADIE

Hey, Sonny...

Sadie leans in close to Sonny and puts her hand on his leg.

SADIE cont.

Wanna go inside?

BRENDA

Come on, you’ll have fun.

Sonny smiles – he’s going for it.

ON CHARLIE – talking with Terry and Candice, while Sonny can be seen being pulled into the house by Brenda, Sadie and Squeaky.

TERRY

So, Charlie... Dennis tells me you’re into some

really happening sounds.

Candice sees Sonny go into the house with the girls and elbows Terry to get his attention.

CHARLIE

Well, I’m just doing what comes honestly..

TERRY

I like that. I do…

DENNIS

I was hoping you’d drop by and listen to what

Charlie’s doing when he gets a little more material

together.

TERRY

Say, don’t you have a tour coming up?

DENNIS

Yeah, but I’m letting Charlie use the studio…

Charlie’ll call and tell you when he’s ready to

show you something, won’t you, Charlie?

CHARLIE

Definitely, man… Definitely…

ON CHARLIE – having big dreams of stardom.

BRENDA NARRATING O.S.

Terry was this big time music producer whose

mom was that actress Doris Day… He was also

the guy who’d discovered Paul Revere and the

Raiders and he was also the producer for the

Byrds... And now he was going to be working

with Charlie...

INT. TERRY & CANDICE’S BEDROOM – SAME MOMENT

Sonny Bono, sweating profusely and completely ripped, is holding Sadie up against the wall like Sonny Corleone in The Godfather, fucking her like some kind of animal, while Brenda and Squeaky in various stages of undress lay on the bed watching with stunned expressions..

BRENDA

Who would have thought Sonny Bono was such

a stud?

SQUEAKY

It’s always the quiet ones.

ON SADIE – being driven to new highs by Sonny Bono.

Monkey Boy's Blog

Some regulars have pointed out that I omitted the link to MONKEY BOY'S BLOG.

Sorry.

Go ahead and read the crazy shit the Monkey flings.


[Photo- Candygramma and Monkeyboy at a mtg of their yahoo group]

Some of the Most Laughable Shit Evah

This really is an excerpt from the Screenplay MANSON GIRLS by Matthew Bright.
It feels like it was written in crayon.

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EXT. BEACH – SHORT TIME LATER

ON CHARLIE – watching Nancy and Sue as they step onto the shore with their boards.

ON NANCY - carrying her surfboard onto the shore and letting it drop to the sand before picking up her towel and drying off.

CHARLIE

Hey, girlie... What’s your name?

Nancy ignores Charlie, slipping on a beach dress as Dede comes up behind him.

DEDE

That’s Nancy, Charlie... Remember, that girl I was

telling you about? And you’re gonna dig her so much.

CHARLIE

I already dig her…

(to Nancy)

Hey, you want to hang out with us today?

Nancy seems reluctant, while Dede stands behind Charlie silently pantomiming like she’s taking a hit of pot – trying to encourage her to come along because this guy has weed.

NANCY

I probably shouldn’t.

SQUEAKY FROMME (19), steps from the Bus and crosses the sand to Charlie.

SQUEAKY

So, we finally meet the famous, Nancy Pitman...

But she looks more like a, “Brenda,” to me...

Don’t you think, Charlie?

CHARLIE

Yeah, she does look like a “Brenda.”

Henceforth, Nancy will now be referred to as “BRENDA.”

ANOTHER ANGLE - Sue appears, carrying her surfboard over her head.

SUE

Hey, Charlie… Hey, Squeaky…

Sue leans her board against the seawall in front of her house, as Charlie takes Brenda’s hand and leads her toward the bus parked at the curb.

INT. THE BLACK BUS – MOMENTS LATER

Brenda, Sue and Dede climb aboard with Squeaky and Charlie following behind.

POV – FIVE GIRLS and several BIG DOGS sit on a carpet inside the bus.

BACK TO SCENE

CHARLIE

Listen up, ladies… This is Brenda… Brenda,

this is Ouish…

OUISH (16), (pronounced “Wheesh”) smiles warmly..

CHARLIE cont.

And that there’s Snake… And that one there

with the baby’s Sadie…

SUSAN ATKINS aka “SADIE”, holding the BABY’S arm up and making him wave.

CHARLIE O.S. cont.

And Squeaky, who you met… She’s sort’a like

everyone’s mom... And Yeller...

SQUEAKY

Welcome to our magic bus, Brenda.

CHARLIE

She don’t know it yet, but my little crystal ball

tells me, she’s gonna be gettin’ real close.

BRENDA

Oh, I am, am I?

CHARLIE

You was lost, Brenda… But now you’re found…

You just didn’t know it ‘cuz you been asleep

your whole life...

Charlie gets behind the wheel as Brenda sits among the Girls, where Squeaky places a string of homemade love beads around her neck and strokes her hair affectionately.

EXT. HIGHWAY – SAME MOMENT

Charlie pulls out onto the Pacific Coast Highway.

INT. BUS – SAME MOMENT

Squeaky produces a small leather pouch and taps a few TABS OF ACID into her hand.

SQUEAKY

Now, Brenda… I need you to close your eyes and

stick out your tongue so I can give you your present.

As Brenda opens her mouth to comply, Squeaky puts a TAB of ACID on her tongue.

SQUEAKY cont.

Okay, now swallow it down like a good little girl.

BRENDA

What is it?

SQUEAKY

It’s God… And nothing’s better for you than God…

Squeaky gives a TAB to Dede who doesn’t need any encouragement. Then she offers one to Sue who refuses, shaking her head to say no.

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